I personally love topics about conspiracies or shadow governments and the likes, especially when it's about the occult and mysticism, but... WHEN DO CREATORS FINALLY START PAYING ATTENTION TO DETAIL?? Your audience isn't as stupid as you seem to think. I could go on forever, but here's a few... * CIA agents do not carry badges! I mean, they're the CIA... they're secret agents... do I need to explain this any further? * Why can't Langdon just be an older guy? That would make it a hundred times more believable. Stop revolving stories about young cute people getting together. No one cares. * No matter how much this guy (Langdon) knows, no one in their right mind is gonna allow him to just suddenly pick up an object on the crime scene, before having it dusted for prints. Similar things happen in other situations. * Pacing things up is great, but don't do that by making everyone (even random bystanders) immediately solving everything as if they've been doing it since birth, like in the Panic Room movies. Other than that, it looks promising and the main villain seems awesome. Please address the details, while there's still a chance.

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